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Critique of Bad Fiction

Posted on April 28, 2011 by Kelli Jae BaeliJanuary 28, 2018

Several years ago, I did a critique for a friend who wanted my editorial-writerly insight on some stories she wrote. After I read them, I was then uneasy, because I am not willing to lie, yet I didn’t want to hurt her feelings. When she asked about the results of my reading, I told her I was afraid she wouldn’t like my critique. She stated emphatically that she wanted the cold hard truth. And so, that’s what I gave her. Below, is the critique, and I post it because I feel it covers lots of territory that every new writer … Continue reading →

Posted in WRITING CRAFT, conflict, lesbians, Writing tips, diction, editing, word choice, attributions, Style, Voice, Willing Suspension of Disbelief, tension, technique, characters, dialogue, bad writing, contrived situations, plot, cliches, WRITING, SEXUALITY, plotting, Fiction Writing | Tagged critique, mechanics, formatting, phrasing, usage, phras | Leave a reply

Romancing the Drone

Posted on April 28, 2008 by Kelli Jae BaeliApril 30, 2012

My friend Georgie sent me this link because she knew I’d get riled up and blog about it. She was right. Romancing the Blog: Purple Prose: A Bum Rap A blog by Rebecca Brandewyne, the romance writer. She should have named herself Rebecca From Sunnybrook Farm. She’s delusional. One look at her absurd photo tells you all you need to know about her writing. She looks like Dolly Parton’s illegitimate daughter. Can you say Glamour Shots? I have written romance before. But I quickly outgrew the sort of romance to be had gushing from the pen of Ms. Brandewyne. I … Continue reading →

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